got a vid for display - lowbudget info vid

FrigidNDEditing wrote on 8/27/2005, 10:58 PM
Right click and save please 17.8 MB wmv 4:54(ish)

lemme know what ya think? (I realize that the editing syle may not agree with you, but that's ok - let it be known I did it like this on purpose).

All constructive crits are welcome

Dave

ALMOST FORGOT - This is a video done for a local church so there are religious references - if you could in anyway be offended by this material (talking about a new program w/in the church) do not watch it and save me the bandwith :)

Comments

kentwolf wrote on 8/28/2005, 1:28 AM
I liked it. Well done.

The sound effects are a little "different," however, to each his own. :)

You may consider, instead of the "zip-swoosh" sound for each bullet point, possibly appearing text for each bullet point; that way each item is fed to the audience both visually and audibly.

The beginning kneeling guy to logo is a good effect. Well done! Sounds interesting!
FrigidNDEditing wrote on 8/28/2005, 7:41 PM
I thought about bullet points, but I didn't want to do anything on the screen besides them talking really.

no-one else has got any comments?

Dave
MUTTLEY wrote on 8/28/2005, 9:04 PM
Good stuff, great open. I'd go with some lower thirds and perhaps pan/crop the first guy a bit, little to much headroom imho.

Good job buddy.

- Ray

www.undergroundplanet.com
RNLVideo wrote on 8/29/2005, 4:30 AM
Dave -

Overall, I liked it. Here are the things that stood out to me:
- I didn't care for the "swoosh" at the edit points in the first, second and fourth sections. The way you did the third one worked though - I guess because if you're going to call attention to the edits, do it in a bigger way :)
- The title screens worked and I can see why you went with those instead of bullets or lower thirds. But - perhaps you can spice them up instead of basic black and white. Maybe you can work the cross in there somehow?
- The headroom where your actor is bowing in front of the cross looked fine, but iI think a slower transition into the red / white BG would be better.

Hope that helps!

Rick
RNLVideo wrote on 8/29/2005, 4:35 AM
Dave -

Overall, I liked it. Here are the things that stood out to me:
- I didn't care for the "swoosh" at the edit points in the first, second and fourth sections. The way you did the third one worked though - I guess because if you're going to call attention to the edits, do it in a bigger way :)
- The title screens worked and I can see why you went with those instead of bullets or lower thirds. But - perhaps you can spice them up instead of basic black and white. Maybe you can work the cross in there somehow?
- The headroom where your actor is bowing in front of the cross looked fine, but iI think a slower transition into the red / white BG would be better.

Hope that helps!

Rick