Garo! Great stuff!

Good thumping beat. Now I'm looking for a "light", but definitely some shots to the beat. At least every 8 or 16 beat - yeah?

1:00 min in too long same shot and too long to get started . .

1:20 FAB CK-ing! Love it!

1:42 You got a strumming that isn't communicating with the beat. That's okay . . but I find this not even "meant". It is slomo with out a reason .. I might have done some trails of the hand to emphasise the point.

1:47 You got a slip/drop down on the tripod? You could cut it out - I'd do the zoom out FROM within the dissolve - more movement created, then it would look like it is meant.

2:00 I'd have done a straight dissolve - like you did - but more on the "refrain" of the song - "And the Moon" - dissolve, yeah?

2:54 . . you got an aspect or interlace on moving hair? Kinda unnecessary

3:27 LOVE IT! !!! ! ! LOVE it! ! ! ! !

3:59 > End . .far, far too long . .needs tightening up - yeah?

I like it! Needs work.

I think for a 4min piece I'd be looking for at least a series of 6 second or 12 sec clips - soooo:

12 second clips
4x5=20 clips

or for the 6 seconds
4x10= 40 clips

Then I could do stuff on the beat and stuff to spare too!

Having more than one camera is pure luxury on something like this. Makes life a lot easier.

In summary? Shoot more and think about the narrative and the beat of the music. Great stuff!

Best regards,

Grazie