Feedback Welcomed (and/or Dreaded) on Short VIdeo

Soniclight wrote on 11/29/2014, 3:34 PM
For those of you who have known me here over the years, you're probably used to my particular outside-the box visual style as well as mysti-poetic subject matter related to my site, CompassionSensuality.Net. I don't expect people to jive with the subject matter. All I ask is to withhold judgement or ridicule -- this is simply a request for feedback, particularly on the how well the music sounds.

The self-powered amps in my 5" KRK near-field speakers are shot so they I bypassed them as passive and I have only a very consumer amp. So even though I use Cubase, it's hard to get a mix that is as crisp and professional as you are probably used to. In short, doing the best I can.

Usually, I do all the music myself (play all instruments through my antiquated but sturdy Korg Trinity) and customize my own MIDI drums/percussion. This time, a musician I know gave my permission to use a strings/pads track of his aptly called "Ethereal" that I really like and then I added a couple of instruments and arrangement to match the flow and ethos of the video. While I did improve the EQ of his original which I feel didn't have enough mid-lower range, there is only so much one can do.

Due to the proliferation of devices and platforms on which one sees videos and hears music, the end user's equipment will have much to do in terms of how good the sound quality is. Due to that this is the Vimeo embed version at my site, it should be playable on most non-computers.

As Farss once suggested, maybe I should do more voice-over, less text. And I even tried it with this one but I felt that my voice or any voice interfered with the music and the gentle flow of it all, so stuck to text. The final video and music mix was done in VP10e. Visual effects were done with Particleillusion.

Please be gentle in your technical/editing critiques yet honest.
Thank you.

The Noble Wand - 1:53 min.

Comments

Byron K wrote on 11/29/2014, 4:48 PM
Interesting music, definitely has a new age vibe to it. Listened to it w/ out watching the video from the PC directly connected to Steinberg UR44 > Mackie 802 mixer, thru a pair of mackie824 monitors. The levels seem to be OK but the snare seems to be a bit muffled, not much if any punch. That may be the tone you were looking for for since this track is pretty mellow.

The mix overall is good for this type of music which is usually background and people listening are't to critical anyway. (;
Soniclight wrote on 11/30/2014, 12:32 AM
Thanks for reply and taking the time to "test" it, so to speak.

Yes, you may be right in that the snare could use just a tad more snap to it. That said, I was going for a softer Nick Mason (Pink Floyd's drummer) feel too. This was also my first music in quite some time, so a tad rusty. As stated in OP, I feel I'm kind of flying blind due to not having a good sound system. So...

I was tempted to buy a pair of Mackie MR5mk3 - 5.25" 2-way powered studio monitors during this holiday season but due to my limited budget I had to prioritize and get my first SSD (for OS drive) and a 3TB 7200 rpm backup drive. No point buying speakers if one's system may be a bit iffy (my 64-bit Win7 still works but is a tad slow and my drive probably has a few too many bad sectors). May even contemplate starting all over with virgin OS and re installing everything. It will be a pain but probably worth it.
Kimberly wrote on 11/30/2014, 8:01 AM
Hey Philip:

I enjoyed the music. I like Vangelis, especially his music from Blade Runner. Your music reminded me of that style, which I mean as a compliment.

Regards,

Kimberly
Soniclight wrote on 11/30/2014, 10:42 PM
Thanks, Kimberly. Funny how I keep getting the "Vangelis" comparison.... Not that surprising, really. While I'm not into that opera-tic phase he went through, I've known of him since the late 60's growing up in Europe -- he was part of and in one sense the leader of a then very popular Greek pop band called "Aphrodite's Child." I've touched base with his music once in a while ever since then.