@AlexLor please note that there is a special thread for posting projects the users have worked on here:
https://www.vegascreativesoftware.info/us/forum/post-your-vegas-creations--109464/
It's linked in https://www.vegascreativesoftware.info/us/vegas-pro-forum/video/ > Important Posts > More Important Posts - Please read this first!
@AlexLor A bit of constructive criticism.
Subtitles: Best shown on an opaque background. White on white is not good. Sometimes unreadable.
Repetition: Sections of the narrative are repeated unnecessarily. For instance, the colour of your urine.
Otherwise, a very good message.